Oh Hannah this is a wonderful write. I didn't know you would write a dark poem haha. Anyway I will try to break it down.

First stanza- I lo e how you started it like this. Using smoke and fog for your choice words. I love how you used fork in the road as well. It is a choice you ha e to make. Unbelievable though as it captures what journey is about to begin.

Second stanza/third stanzas- I love the use of the dash to tie the two stanzas together and I love the use of downtown and splintered rib cage ?? Great imagery there. As it truly shows how far the angel has fallen without their wings. The third stanza has unbelievable metaphor useage and when graffitiing you need a target and I love the angel being the target for their misery and pain. Third stanza is my favorite.

Ending- storm chaser wow. I love how this character has a positive outlook on their life no matter how far they have fallen. Like no matter what they do they can't do anything right. To strike a match across splintered wings wow. The imagery there is so beautiful.

I love this poem so much. It is unbelievable. Thiat is just what I think 5/5

Wow, fabulous write. I absolutely love it!!