Ok again no flaws so heres the breakdown.

First- again I like set up. I like how its like a movie or reality on halloween. Where people want to be scared. :). I love the last line too where you say lets say hello to the ghosts inside. I like the spooky feel to it.

Second- I love the use of the word mischevious because it fits perfectly with the poem.

Third- the imagery is impactful because even with door and the spider webs put it over the top great wording here. And the feel of the house not being used in many years :)

Fourth- I love the creepy feel of this part because of the disappearing friends. It makes the reader feel like what happened and are the friends really there or ghosts of the house?

Fifth- this is here the poem gets interesting. The creepy feeling picks up and the disappearing friends enhances that. I love the way you decribe the win as screaming. You decribe all the sounds well. The creaking tiles even though its empty and the door slaming. The paranoid feeling of someone watching you is amazing.well written.

Six- the feelings come to life!! The way you decribe it is outstanding. Every line leads up to this. I love the thoughts of feeling a hand on the neck and the haunting. In a panicked state you run to no where and are too blinded to see what is in front of you. This is well written.

Seven/ending- this ending is wonderful and ties the poem up well where the spirits show up. Mad for their disturbance. So they feel the visitor must be punished.

Your wording and lines flow together perfect. 5

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