Comments : Desperate Prayers

  • 11 years ago

    by Angie

    This is so very heartfelt, she is in good hands with all those angels watching over her... I can feel the worry and love within your words... I will keep Nonna and you and your family in my thoughts...

    xoxoxo

  • 11 years ago

    by Redangelwings

    This really is heartfelt saffie. I think prayers are so good because God really does listen. When I think of prayers I think of night time and before bed. I love the way you decribed the prayers and tears. You really did a great job writing your emotion out. I love the cotton soaking them up because I can see you crying a lot. The tears freely flowing and you praying and talking to God. This person is very important to you and you can tell that. The readers can tell and have your heart in this poem. The thousand angels line made me smile. They are ever protecting. I love the child like imagery. You both seem to have the sweetest souls. God will always give you time and if you believe he will help you. :). You can tell how much love because you put your heart into thid. 5/5