Tomorrow(senryu)

by Baby Rainbow   Jul 2, 2013


Time is ticking by,
yet we still take for granted
what might never be .

Saffie
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2/7/13

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  • 11 years ago

    by ThebutterfliesMuse

    Yes I agree with everyone else. This is very true indeed. Time doesn't wait for anyone at all so we can't waste any of it. We as humans dont really know how to be great at time mangment. Every minute or even second that goes by is more time we are not truly living. We do take it for granted as I was saying. We live so unhappy. Life is not to be taken for granted at all. We always live for what not is and we don't even life now. We never know what tomorrow can bring or if we will even live until tomorrow. I do love the great message though. We dont live at all and the time is just a count down to our death. You can truly never know what might be at all. This is a beautiful write and thr message is there. Don't waste time on something you can't control or people who hinder your life! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I love how such a simple piece can leave me so lost in thought. So true. Wonderful write, so powerful for being so short

  • 11 years ago

    by Hellon

    So true...we always say...yeah, I'll do it tomorrow. Some things these past couple of weeks have made me change my approach to this theory and I'm just putting as much effort into doing as much as I can today because...as you say..we just don't know what tomorrow will bring. Nice message!

  • 11 years ago

    by Wild Flower

    I agree this is so true and powerful too!!!
    Awesome job, love this :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    This is so true, Saffie. We are all guilty of it, taking time for granted without even realizing it sometimes. I know a few things that have opened my eyes to it, though...and I thank God every day that he allows me to open my eyes in the morning.

    Wonderful write with a inspiring message!