Comments : Peacock and the Tree

  • 11 years ago

    by Hellon

    First of all let me say that I had forgotten there was also a glitch in the friendship section...you have to log in again to comment but...it's worth it for this one Andrea!

    Your title is so off the wall...why would I not come here to investigate?

    This poem is very zanny....very hippy/flower child attitude to it...Mmmm won't ask THAT question :)

    It's just so bizzarre it just has to be a happy memory you have of a time spend with a special person...it just reminded me of a place I went with my sister and I had the notion to stand in a window and pretend to be a mannequin ..so I did ...this made me laugh so...thanks for that!

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Andrea, this is beautiful and touching, while a little tear escaped my eye, I also smiled throughout...
    I am guessing this piece is about Momma P, and that in itself makes me love it all the more, I can see the two of you, with you shaking your booty and Momma laughing.

    I love this piece, really nice to read, you know I've missed your writes, and the ones like this, I've missed the most, where I can feel you in every word.

    :) Love you!
    xx

  • 11 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    What a well written friendship poem with (what seems to me to be relatively)contemporary memories

    Peace