Last line: "ne" should be "be" :]

Beautiful message in such simple, soothing words... I kind of read this as a lullaby as well, words able to be understood by everyone, words that take a lot of meaning in their simplicity. Just saying and encouraging to "hold on" over and over again is inspiration. Things will lighten up and there will be brighter days, it may just take time.

Good write, take care and keep writing!

Hi...great poem...

=D

but sorry,,,since PP is a little angel...well i thought i could play...=) the role of a little devil if its ok....

Until when are you going to hold on??

when is that someday for the child to be strong??

how soon is soon for the child to be free??

---just hold on??do the child has anything to hold on for that so long??

(you may take it seriously....the words only....the questions....but dont get mad at me...im just making you confused...hehe...cause you should know where are you going to stand too...)

loveyah!!