Undying

by Bailey   Jul 3, 2013


Tears run down my face,
why do I feel so out of place?

You throw me in the flames,
and put me in chains.

You hold me against my will,
to give yourself a thrill.

You hold me down,
and watch me drown.

All I see is dark,
when I search for a spark.

Wipe my tears away,
keep my thoughts at bay.

Hold me tight,
help me win this fight.

My whole being wants your love,
but you shot me down like you would a dove.

Kill me now before its too late,
or the devil will use me for bait.

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  • 11 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Your flow's not so flawless in this one. Your last few stanzas make the piece a bit rocky. However the , message is good and your story is clear. Your word choice was decent and your use of emotion was ok. The piece wasn't exactly memorable but it was still alright.

    Good write but 4/5

    • 11 years ago

      by Bailey

      This was one of my earlier poems..