Hi...=)

the whole poem...ilove it..

but it makes me "WHAAT??"

in the end...beyond poem...it seems that you love him but sadly it doesnt seem soo.......alright in your part....

i dont have the right to comment or say something about it.....cause its the way you love.......

Godbless..

I love the style and voice here. Overall this piece is simple and extremely well done. Especially with your flow. The rhymes are close and easygoing, your tone is well conveyed, and your form is very basic (but well done) nice write.