by ThebutterfliesMuse
Another great porm wow. I know its supposed to be short but all three lines are great.the first line tell how you feel and it so emotional. The second line is why you hurt so much and it really does bring to life the poem and the last line means you are finally letting go. So sad and wonderful 5 |
by Kate
For something so short this does pack a lot of power. I love the way you worded it because it really hits it home. Gets the point across nicely and it is deep even though it is short. Nicely done :) |