This poem is fantastic. Heres the breakdown.

1 and 2 stanzas- I love how you started out this poem as you used desolate and came back with the eilted flower and dry river lines because it has a super sad feeling. Then you come back with the kiss of life. Outstanding. Then I love the decribing worda you used in the second stanza for your onced depressed heart. I love the use of once as past tense meaning you are breaking free with the feel of your loved one.

3 and 4 stanzas- wow the third stanza has souch beautiful imahery. I love the use of hue for the cheeks and even in the rain being close makes the smole. Great wording there. You decribrd the eyes so so well and and they are portals in the soul whrre love lies.I love how you dance in the foutth stanza as it it is the poem and it really pops :).

5/6/ end- the imagery is so beautiful and you describe the scene and dance so well. You can feel the love snd uou give your heart to this person. I love ittt so much!!!
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