Hi....=)

"happens"
--try "happen"

"In peoples lives"
--maybe "in peoples life"

"Hurts and strife's"
--im not sure if it should be "strives"
(in our english lesson: change -fe to -ve if it is going to be plural)

"Taking your wrist,
Cutting it deep...
Always awake
And just cant sleep."
---so...?youre a cutter???

"Your not the only one
Who tries to be strong
But always falls weak
When all things goes wrong"
--i love the first 2 lines....taking courage in everyday life to be strong...but sad..coz you always fall down...

SUCCESS IS 99% FAILURE
(just got from few readings)

it doesnt matter how many times you fall...just count how many times you stand up...every fall you had,you can learn something new...earn the lessons you had,,coz someday it will be enough for you to hold and stand and it is worth fighting for...

" trough"
--should be "through"

"Praying that someday
They too can be loved
The day they can end
Their fakeness and sobs"
--i love that....you never loose hope...

"So always remember
Wherever you are
Your not the only one
Mending a scar..."
--i love the rhyme..hehehe...

=) Godbless kid...