Comments : Sleeveless.

  • 11 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This is so lovely! I see you in a very vulnerable state, ready to perhaps go towards something you've always wanted. Loved everything about this, the sleeveless thing really emphasizes you exposing yourself to this person & letting them in. I just love this :) It's perfect

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    You done it again! Another masterpiece, and just as beautiful, the hope that radiates towards the end. There's a sorrow that adds to the piece but doesn't cloud it, you know.

    I love the tone and the whole wording and it amazes me how you can write something so good at the earliest of hours.

    Amazing write as always,
    xx