Regret

To the point and brief, the best type of poem!

I love how this is short and to the point really. The way you decribe tears though is wonderful. Liquid forms around my eyes. Thats pretty good imagery. As I can imagine tears falling and you sobbing in your hands or something like that. I love the wording in the second line as well because a sad sigh means you are very upset. The first two lines are put together well I feel. Its hard to let someone go for sure. It seems like you will never forget but time has a funny way of healing a broken heart. You are stronger then you think and can overcome this. Anyway... good write. 5

Hi pink.....

short but informative.....

--deep sigh.....really.....