Awwwwwwwwwwww this is so beautiful Mohan, I love this poem sooooo much, it is fabulous, splendid, the emotion you put into it is priceless, sad poem though, brought sadness to my heart, great read!

Hi mo.....

"like a spring
you came into my life
but you are gone like
a rain drop in the desert "

---i love that line.....it describes already everything...

from the start of your love for her until she bids you bye...

im thinking how to describe it in one or two words...

BUBBLE GUM!!!

sweet can be tasted at first.....but unfortunately the sweetness was gone after chewing it a while and you need to threw it...

;)

well penned mo....=)

Beautiful piece.

Mohon... my friend..i love you for this piece of poem... this was an beautiful poem...
The title of poem was so amazing that i cudn't help myself frm reading... i read it thrice... cuz it really express the feeling frm wat m going through....
it was fantastic... everybit of poem was superb..
Good bless your writing skill...
keep writing...:)

Love it :)

Nice poem.

Wow so powerful and sensetive really love it it shows how much memories can hurt well done Mohan keep it up 10/10

Great Poem. :-)

Enchanted by the visions of this poem.

Wow, so BEAUTIFUL!!!

I can feel to some extent how you feel all the while..but you know,there is this powerful thing called time which heals every wounds! Stay strong friend!

This is beautiful and intruging. I like this a lot. 5/5

No doubt great write from the heart.