Yikes.....broken/lost love is sooo freaking hard to deal with. I hate it and I'm so happy to be on a pause from relationships to avoid these feelings..but I do love the poetry that comes out of it.

I love what you've done here, tricking your reader into thinking this poem will be about a strong love according to the beginning stanzas, and then it turns out to be what Aries is NOT rather that what it was....

awesome ending line...this is a strong piece of emotion as always from you...I love that you repeated the use of Aries throughout this...wonderful.

Written soft and beautiful!!
Like a whirlwind that swept you off of your feet and gently placed you back on the ground.
Great read!!

Amazingly done!,
/Aries is the name I give to the remains of a romance that far too sinful to function, that had too many flaws to last. <this stanza sums it all for me,it's like hoping for the best but expecting the worst.
congrats