Comments : Final goodbye

  • 11 years ago

    by Redangelwings

    When we lose someone it is very hard to deal with. It seems here that they left you for no reason. It is haunting the memorirs you have good or bad. It's hard to deal with and the heart becomes so torn you can do nothing but cry. The emotions left in this poem are great. Though it is very sad to see such heartbreak inside a poem. It doesn't always feel like goodbye because it is so hard to say it. As I said memories make you feel like the person is still there with you. I love how there is only one location with this. The house you lived in it seems. You both were married or dating and this person walks out on you. Sometimes it is better to start over and move away from the bad memories or even real life. You will heal in time. Great write 5/5