Wow... that was breathtaking. Wonderful flow and amazing rhyming. Fantastic write.

Whoa, heartrending for sure. I agree that the rhyme and flow are spot on, very well done. Though I also enjoy the style and strength of your voice throughout the piece. For a first write on the site it's an excellent entry. Wonderful job, stunning piece.

P.s. the oozing emotion was by far the best part to me; made me feel like I was in your shoes.

This is very well written savannah. nice job on the emotion it's heartbreaking, but I feel it.

Love the rhyme the flow and the message inside this poem. Very powerful piece.

To many whens, and to many why's
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Very awesome :)

This is so heart breaking.

This is amazingly heart breaking and emotionally breath taking.

Oh my god... how is it even possible that a poem can be this good??! I would rate higher than 5 if I could!

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