Comments : Why Me?

  • 11 years ago

    by WintersAngel

    Very relatable :) nice wording and rhyming

    • 11 years ago

      by Bailey

      Thanks ^-^

  • 11 years ago

    by dindee

    Bai.........tsk.tsk...
    emotional poem...when it comes to love...

    "I want to be done with you,
    But I just can't let you go,"
    ---you want but you cant....what makes you hold onto it?

    "Why do I hate you so much?
    Why do I stay..."
    ---probably you hate him cause you love him..you dont want the way he treats you...you stay cause you love him..

    no one can make a decision for you...

    bai...that is love...that is how girls love...

    you hate him but you want him to hugs you even if youre mad at him...

    you hate his lies...but you still believe in him hoping that it would be true...

    you cried a lot cause of him...but he's the one causes your happiness sometimes..

    you want to forget him,,curse him...but you still love him..

    love is complicated bai...as always..

    =/

    • 11 years ago

      by Bailey

      ._. my friend Ali and my friend Ethan are both trying to get me to leave him because he treats me really bad

  • 11 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This reminds me of something I wrote a while back. Aswas said earlier its very rrelatable. I like the rhyme scheme and yet again you have mastered flow. Wonderful piece especially with the flowing oozing emotion