The man inside the mirror

by safachan   Jul 8, 2013


You inside the mirror
tell me what do you see
the man from the mirror
why don't you look at me
my reflection is unclear
and it feels so cold in here
you inside the mirror
tell me what do you see
I'm screaming for you to see
although my own voice i can't hear
I'm trying so hard to break free
even though in this darkness i can't see
this storm growing deep inside of me
how come i no longer know how do i feel
oh man from the other side of the mirror
I'm dying for you to turn and look at me

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  • 11 years ago

    by Sudo Nim

    - I said I would return the favour; thank you for your feedback -

    I enjoy this. Reading, I was rushed through it and felt the desperate sense of misunderstanding [from the individual looking back]. (Acknowledged, my own take). I feel that this idea is incredibly powerful and, for such a difficult emotion to convey, you have done it well. You have inspired me to tackle the mirror.
    I think you can still refine it. Go well.

    • 11 years ago

      by safachan

      Thank you but honestly i didn't do it just so you can read my poems , i honestly enjoyed it and i am grateful any way

    • 11 years ago

      by safachan

      Thank you but honestly i didn't do it just so you can read my poems , i honestly enjoyed it and i am grateful any way

  • 11 years ago

    by Mams

    The way feelings are expressed in this poems are great.... its fabulous... small but very strong poem.. . keep writing...
    :)

    • 11 years ago

      by safachan

      Thank you my dear , i'm glad it reached you

  • 11 years ago

    by WintersAngel

    Beautifully written. I love it!!! Wonderful poem.

  • 11 years ago

    by fireflylights13

    This poem is amazing really well done!

    • 11 years ago

      by safachan

      Thank you very much , i appreciate it

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