Meena, you are really good with form poetry. I wish to see a sonnet from you. This one poems is pack with a lot of info about how past can come and ruin our happiness that is if we let it. I like how you personified the feeling and I'm pretty amaze by the rhymes.

Amazing!!! This is an incredibly sad and a well written poem. I really love it how you have put up the words with such great thought. The style is good.

Keep writing:)

Nominated!!:)

Judging Comment:

Meena, is the queen of formed poetry in my opinion! I have read several pieces by her, and this one stands out for me. She takes this form and wraps sorrow felt emotion in each line, tying together the thyme pattern nicely throughout. Truly admire this powerful poem.

Well Done Meena

A very creative writing. A beautiful sad poem.

Without happiness you have nothing !

Great wee poem Meena !

So very deep...this is simple awesome.

as past comes visiting with rage

This is so true & am sure so many could relate to this.

Loved it...all the way.

all the best & take care