I'm so sorry for your loss, but in writing this you have such emotion that made me smile and touched my heart. Losing someone is never easy, it takes time to accept, but if we remember we are not alone we can keep going.

I thought it was unique how you kept the "format" of the first stanza in the second and switched it around. It is like as much as you were there by his/her side, he/she turned away and kept to a certain side of darkness, maybe depression even. He/she was always there for you and succeeded in bringing happiness, but it seems like it was deeper than just saying encouraging words....he/she may have refused love of their own self but you still loved he/she through it all.

Beautiful, soulful poem expressing this person's legacy in your life and how you will live life with these memories of your true companion.

Keep writing!

"You ventured to a world divine". Girl, I like the way you present death in that line........ Sorry for the lost.... Awesome write.

It was good

Thanks guys, it means alot!