Comments : On The Run

  • 11 years ago

    by WintersAngel

    Wow, very nice subject and I love the fast pace!!

  • 11 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    Short but great. i liked the rhymes you chose. they were bloody awesome. lol :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Jessica

    Very sad & emotional poem :) 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Natalie

    Got to agree with the above, the pace is great and the rhyming is good so the poem flows well.