by Baby Rainbow
This was pulled off so well because it something we know every day, we know how easy it is for love and hate to change and I have to say I think that message fitted this form perfectly. It showed how quickly it turns, and the adjectives used just shows what true opposites these really are. |
Nicely done! I love seeing forms like this and the diamante is fun to read. I like how profoundly you expressed the whole synonym/antonym. I can clearly see this love being respect whereas hatred turns a person away, and turns into resentment and as you wrote, often revenge. |
by Lemon
The contrast in this is just wonderful, how the two concepts bleed into each other. The structure is very interesting as well, I don't think I've ever seen a diamante poem before! |
by Lune de ma vie
Contrast goes oh so well, we all know what it is like to be in love and how it takes work. I like how you started it with Love and ended it with Hate..It really describes a relationship in a whole. |