I like this poem a lot. Because it is so simplistic but you voice what you wanted to say. I lovr the title first of all. Its great from what the poem reads. The rhyming isgood and it flows so very well. I love the last stanza as the angel is not slone with her fallen wings. It kinda has the feel that they have all fallen to hell. I love that mmetaphor. Overall its good! 5

Awesome you told a kicking story well done