by xoxShorteexox Jul 10, 2013
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
She's a tease who knows how to play you, |
by ThebutterfliesMuse
I also like this poem a lot. I love how you describe a dangerous women. I love how you say it all out what you do. Its kinda hard for me to break down this poem because you said it all lol. I suppose anyone can be dangerous anf its funny how we can tease each other to get what we want. I do really like the romeo part though because you are saying this women is poison and she can kill or hurt or do anything she wants to. The ending is great to because in the end no one can get her unless she wants them a kinda hard to get feel. Which is amazing. The poem flows so nicely and is great. 5 |
This is an amazing poem |