by Moises Delgado Jul 10, 2013
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
I am a breeze, |
Although i commend your ability to be able to make everything rhyme, maybe you could try just rhyming the sencond and fourth lines of the stanza altogether a brilliant piece :) well done! |
by Mams
No words to comment... but truly heart touching.... well writen...:) |
by WintersAngel
Aww, this is really and truly beautiful :) |