When You are near Me

by drratan   Jul 10, 2013


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There is another river
Ever sparkling and fair
And there is another boat
Which is coming near

There is another hill
Which has greener creeper
And there is another field
Ever lush and brighter

Come with me to this hill
And to this river
We will be in the same boat
Believe me, my dear .

At times the river did not flow
The boat never sailed to the land of dreams
The creeper all dried up and died
To each other we seemed to have lied.

Poems connect continents
Poets connect sentiments
Only then our lies become fancy
When you are in love you can see

The boat sailed to the land of dreams
Irradiated with golden sunbeams
You may call it a poem
Another river , another sea

When you are near me.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Poems connect continents
    Poets connect sentiments
    Only then our lies become fancy
    When you are in love you can see

    ^^This stanza stood out for me for it shows
    that even though words come from afar there
    will always be a connection.

    The boat sailed to the land of dreams
    Irradiated with golden sunbeams
    You may call it a poem
    Another river , another sea

    ^^Another stanza I like for its soothing tone
    it has.

    When you are near me.

    ^^The ending is touching. When the one we
    love is by our side everything seems like
    heaven and uplifting...another enjoyable read
    :)

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