Comments : When You are near Me

  • 11 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Poems connect continents
    Poets connect sentiments
    Only then our lies become fancy
    When you are in love you can see

    ^^This stanza stood out for me for it shows
    that even though words come from afar there
    will always be a connection.

    The boat sailed to the land of dreams
    Irradiated with golden sunbeams
    You may call it a poem
    Another river , another sea

    ^^Another stanza I like for its soothing tone
    it has.

    When you are near me.

    ^^The ending is touching. When the one we
    love is by our side everything seems like
    heaven and uplifting...another enjoyable read
    :)