by Tim Jul 10, 2013
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Picking words, that together rhyme, |
by DarkLight
That is totally true. |
by Bayan
Loved it ♡ |
by Tim
Thanks Bayan! |
by gumshuda
Oh woww... |
by Kristen
People nowadays never seem to write for themselves and always want to try and impress others, and that makes the poem worse in my opinion,because instead of just writing your feelings out you are just writing metaphor crap to impress. But this poem does ring true in a lot of ways because you should write just the way you want to. There are no tests that need to be true or you have to pass, there is no time limit on much you have to write at all. This poem shows people how to write not in the stand point of writing words but what comes from on the inside. It does not matter what people think about it as long as the author likes it. But here I do like your rhyming a lot, because it flows well with the poem as well as it is not forced at all. The message is strong and well endowed. Well crafted poem! |
by BlueJay
I like this piece. Its a well written simple reminder of what so many people here understand at some point in time to some extent. Great piece. I like the unique flavor to it as well. |