by Tim Jul 12, 2013
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
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by DarkLight
I like your way of writing. The format is great and the poem itself is unique and beautiful.. |
by gumshuda
Hmmm....a nice story here... |
by Burning Angel
Aw this is sweet. I really like how you set up the stanzas and i couldnt help but smile at the story itself xD |
by ASPHYXIATED
This is a cute poem, and I can see how you could turn it into a sweet&soft song. However, in my opinion, there are a few mishaps which may be due to typos but tend to throw the flow off, for me. |
by ThebutterfliesMuse
This is really unique for sure Tim. |