Aww this is really cute. :) I enjoyed the style alot.

All I can hear is you singing this in my head and it makes me grin. I like it.

Likes <3.. Likes <3... Likes <3...fabulous piece....
:)

This is really unique for sure Tim.

First half- I like the way you started out with this. Girl likes boy. I like how you question the boy liking the girl.its very difficult to share our feeling to the ones we like. Yhe first two lines of the girl are amazing. You do have to question it because guys do play games and you never truly know if they like uou the same way. your words say perfectly there is never any need to hide. Its hard to share never knowing whats inside. Your cat and mouse metaphor os a great one. The guy is the cat and mouse is the girls heart!. The last stanza of the girl is cute. Without really telling him shes wants him to say yes!.

Second part- I like how you made the guy answer instead of just talking to her. The dialogue really brings out the poem I think. And you made it seem like a guy answer as in hes mad for its a calming mad... all guys know what I mean haha. We are always worried that they will say no so I love the answer. I love the hug line as in everything is ok. I loved everything about this poem. The metaphors and the rhyming. The point of views were just great as they show one for each. The wording was great for each side!. Excellent 5

This is a cute poem, and I can see how you could turn it into a sweet&soft song. However, in my opinion, there are a few mishaps which may be due to typos but tend to throw the flow off, for me.
Such as;
"Am I the mouse? Do you the play-cat?"
It just doesn't flow as soft as the poem intends, maybe something like
"Am I the mouse, while you play cat?"
Sometimes just rearranging the words can create the flow you're looking for!

Another example of this would be;
"I'm a big gown up girl now, I can handle the truth,"
-- Big grown up girl sounds too chunky, too many words. I'm a big girl now, or I'm a grown up now or something with less clutter would flow nicer, in my opinion that is. :)

Over all it has potential, I'd say sit down and read it out loud a few times, maybe even sing it to try find the flow you're looking for and try to keep it somewhat consistent (: Good work.

Aw this is sweet. I really like how you set up the stanzas and i couldnt help but smile at the story itself xD

Hmmm....a nice story here...
I just found this a little something....

 Do you the play-cat? 
* maybe if you worded a little different...like...do you play like the cat..or...do you play-cat? Or something else...or if that was intentional I shouldn't be speaking on it then :)

Oh you play the piano nice....finished making this into a song???? :)

I like your way of writing. The format is great and the poem itself is unique and beautiful..
(correction)
the fifth stanza, fourth line,

"If the answers a yes Boy, then we'll both surely win."

If the answer "is" yes boy, then we'll both surely win.
That will make the flow smooth,
Other than that, I'm impressed with your wording.