Nice expression, with words of bitterness of losing a loved one or sharing him/her with someone else. Your choosing of words clearly reveals your thought, nice one!

(Y) NO WORDS!! :)

Good job sis thats a great way to put it wonderful 5/5

Hi...owp...sorry for i just have read it now...too late...right??

anyways...wow...tin...did you ever...or what did you do in here???lol....

Oh I love the bitterness! I'm sorry honey but I am a darker than normal with Ash and Athena gone. I love the bitterness, the depression, and the raw anger that you have towards this fool who hurt you. It's sad when people do that and that's why I hardly date because I don't want to be someone's second choice I want to be their FIRST choose that being said life goes on if you know he doesn't love you like that dump him there's a million other men in the world trust me there's more men than women out there in the world they probably need you more than you need them anyways cheers and thanks for making my day with a dark poem! 5/5

-Mori