Comments : Psychological Trap

  • 11 years ago

    by Redangelwings

    Ok you made my muse run wild here haha. Heres just what I think.

    I love cages around the heart because I think of a beautiful butterfly which is who you are. The wings are breaking and all you need is someones love. Sometimes we can't see the pain we have inside which is why I love the blindfold line. We are blinded by what what we can't see at all. There is a lot of emotion In the second stanza. I feel like a child is involved. I love the sadness with the painting. I see the pain you have inside. Sometimes you have to do what is best for you though. Walking away may see selfish or difficult but in the end sometimes its better.

    I feel your pain though this is really heartbreaking and I think if you walked away you would heal more In time then with staying. That is just my opinion. I love how you put your heart and soul into this person. They have become part of you. All you can do is love this person or child with all you can give. I love the way you describe eyes as crystal. Eyes are the most beautiful thing on a person I feel. You would give everything for the ones you love and that shows your awesome personality. 5/5