Naive

by Terri Lynn   Jul 2, 2004


Whispering waves say I love you willingly.
Stars start to wink slighly promoting passion.
Vibrant vivacious sunsets dare desire.
Candy colored moon beams create chasms in your shield.
And yet you are unware, unacquainted, unconscious to me and my affection, you're my affliction, my addiction. An obbession if you will...and you have no idea of my love for you.

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  • 19 years ago

    by alexander

    Very beautiful
    Excellent
    wow it just takes my breath away
    congrats

  • 20 years ago

    by Nicole

    Ooh wow, nicely done! I really like how it was short but packed so much power. Good job, a 5!

  • 20 years ago

    by julie

    excellet, you have great talent!