Yay I am super glad you changed it up.

First stanza- you can totally feel the love here for sure!. You start out so very strong and pull the readers in fot sure. Its nice to feel loved by anyone. An angel has that warm feeling of being safe no matter what. You alwayswant to be taken home to feel the light you haveinside your heart.

Second stanza- as I said before any one who truly loves you will make you feel safe indeed. You forget anyone else around you and all the hate you feel insidewill disappear. I love the way you worded this.

Third stanza- It always feels like anyone you love stands tall over you as we see them as our hero or protector. Always makes you happy no matter what. In life we always don't feel like we belong and we love anyone who does.

Ending- I like this ending because we always lose our fears when we feel safe and you did a great job of describing that.

Overall I loved it because it flowed so nicely and I liked the imagery and rhyming. The lines connected well I feel and its great you wrote a non sad one! 5

We can be so fragile, breakable when we feel inadequate. The strength builds in this poem it is written well great work