Secluded

by Daylight Lucidity   Jul 16, 2013


A canopy of trees stretch their arms overhead,
Interlocking their finger-like branches and shading the path
On which I walk; silent and lonesome in the elements
Of secluded nature where I travel.
My thoughts chaotic though my external smile
Reveals nothing but a calm and reserved appearance
But here, in this path, I quietly break down for a while
Letting the seldom rays of sun glint off my trailing tears.
I hear the animals rustle in the bushes all around me,
Whispering and chatting amongst themselves as I move,
This walk was one to release me from the suppressed sadness I've kept
A secret. Now it is a mere reminder of what I have come to avoid.
The uneasy ground crunches beneath my footsteps,
Twigs snap and leaves crumple,
My sighs reverberating off of paled trees
As I get lost in the city's dried grass jungle.
I can hear faint whispers swirl around my ears,
Laughing and snickering as I go
Telling each other that I am just another girl
Looking for some lucky wind to blow.
Secluded, I walk to nowhere in particular
Just long and far enough so I can think
About the beauty of the nature I so miss
And the damage this loneliness has had on me.

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  • 11 years ago

    by ThebutterfliesMuse

    Ok Brittany you always blow me away with your poems. Your imagery is so fantastic here as always. I really could see myself as the person walking down the path. I loved every lines detailed fully rich with vocabulary and metaphors. The nature elements are used greatly here and it could be verse in a nature and sad. I love the last four lines I walk to nowhere at all. Which means you are lost in the world of nothing. nature is healing no matter what and depression makes us feel lonely no matter what. Anyway wow. Thats just my take on it! 5