Comments : Secluded

  • 11 years ago

    by ThebutterfliesMuse

    Ok Brittany you always blow me away with your poems. Your imagery is so fantastic here as always. I really could see myself as the person walking down the path. I loved every lines detailed fully rich with vocabulary and metaphors. The nature elements are used greatly here and it could be verse in a nature and sad. I love the last four lines I walk to nowhere at all. Which means you are lost in the world of nothing. nature is healing no matter what and depression makes us feel lonely no matter what. Anyway wow. Thats just my take on it! 5