Your poems are oh so unique. It seems like you always get better!

First- wow such imagery here. We all get tattoos to feel alive and leave a memory in us. I know its a metaphor but still. I love it so far. Love does paint a pretty picture by far and its wonderful when it does. I love the set up here.

Second- this might be my favorite stanza because of the wording you used to describe. The way you paint with words is mind blowing really. I love the colours of the wings and how they healed your heart. Butterflies tend to do that in us poets. So easy to write about yet so many words we can use!. I love again how it healed your inner self. A beating heart is truly a gift. Yoh couldchange it to fluttering heart.... fof the butterfly.

Third- the first four lines are great as well. When we see a beautiful person nothing else matters and when we see ourselves in the mirror we don't see what other people see. The way you used fragile is great because butterflies and people can both be fragile. Love is always deep and it really does touch our hearts. Its new and fresh everytime so its hard to let people on!

Ending- I believe the ending is perfect because you say how you feel directly. Everyone is different just like every tatoo is. Just like love tattoos can last forever. And in the end you will always love it. :)) this poem is so beautiful and unique. I saw no flaws! 5