Ok I love this because there are so many things you are saying in such a short poem! The first line I can imagine you as a bird falling woth a broken wing or both broken wings here. I love the metaphor though or in my opinion of the bird! The second line is so sad the saddest of the poem. This line has great. The broken wings from falling leave you with scars and a haunting past. I love how you used scars as emtional not on your wrist or anything like that. I love thd hope in the last line because despite your scars you have enough valor tomove on and live your life. I love the poem as a whole from the broken to the hopeful. 5