Interesting little poem and great unique title which fits well.

I think a little changing of some words ould make this poem a lot better, I felt too many its in the beginning and found it a bit off putting and a little confusion, it was harder to follow and had to re read it to try and make sense of it.

To begin with the first opening "its" should be it's (it is) then perhaps you could change the second or third its to the?

The message itself is very good and your idea is good, just a little rewording so that it flows better for the reader will make a bigger impact for them and give your poem justice.

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