by safachan Jul 16, 2013
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
When you die you simply leave everyone behind |
by Natalie
Thank you for writing this. I have just lost my closest friend and I'm having a very hard time dealing with it so reading this helped me realise that I am not alone. As a thank you the least I can do it credit and analyse your poem. |
by safachan
Thank you so much i can't tell you how much it means to me to read these words , i am proud and happy to know that i am not the only one feeling this way , and actually , i've wrote this poem while i was depressed and sad for the loss not only of people but for many other things , i simply want to say thank you my dear it's an honor and a pleasure |
This poem has touched me deeply |
by safachan
Thank you i'm glad it did |
by WintersAngel
Very sad indeed. Great rhyming though. I love how it feels as though you're describing not only death but the loss of a loved one as well. |
by safachan
Death isn't just about dying alone , it's about how those we love will feel when it comes and how great their sadness and suffering will be |
by DeviousCharmer
Beautiful poem!!! really. loved everything about it. so sad and true |
by safachan
Thank you , |