Pain is not just what you feel......, but an emotion that can kill.......... But don't look to long.... It only last a while! Nice lines; I like it. Keep the pen alive.

I like this poem because it is true. I love the first two lines pain really can be a killer of all things. It can be all the bad emotions wrapped up into one thing. Nights are always the hardest. The dark can be a very cruel thing when you have to mask your pain. I like the ending too. Sometimes it does last for only a little while. Yet we can always overcome it if we tried. The only flaw I see is saine should be sane. But good overall. 4

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