Thank you for accepting my challenge!

The feel of the first stanza is great hun. The peacefulness is gteat. I love that the bird gives you peace within yourself. Its gteat to get a new start In life and feels awesome when yout verve pretends you can fly aeay on a birds wings where you can't get hurt at all. Everyone deserves a second chance no matter
what they have been through. I can imagine all of this in my head. Great imagery.

I love how you make this bird as your family. The one you can truly depend on. I love how the bird makes you stand no matter how much you wany to fall. Its love that makes your heart beat. Again in the fourth stanza you have lost everything. You dont have to hide from this bird at all. No matter what you have been through!

the ending is great as you put so much trust into the bird. You want him to save you so much. You can be saved from listening to such a simple sound. Like a bird singing. This is a sad but full of so much hope. 5