Comments : I Need You

  • 11 years ago

    by ThebutterfliesMuse

    This one I love as it is so heartfelt.

    Wow. I loved how you compaired smiles to a touch. It really can have the same effect on it. As this smile calmed you down and made your heart flutter normally. There is always a reason for a heart to beat. Wether its bad or good. I loved the vivid imagery of this as the smile kisses your cheek. The vocabulary is great on the second stanza. And you can feel the love of it. The tender kiss of the moonlight and the angel together is perfect. I love the wording as it never passed through your mind. Love new experience!

    Its always great to find the one you truly love as you spend days thinking about their love. I love the tears of joy as it is not used much in poetry it was a nice touch.
    I love how they heal your hurt heart as well it is great when you feel good again. The sun reflecting of clear waters wow. Beautiful! I love how you share glasses with each other. That was wonderful wording there. It really does take two to share love!

    Its great when you want to hold each other close forever and an angel is beautiful. I wish you would describe the angel more though. That is my one flaw. I love the old english feel though with the note. Its unique because not a lot of people do that any more. Its very romantic in my opinion. Overall great! 5

  • 11 years ago

    by ForeverSpring

    Such an amazing poem