by Daylight Lucidity Jul 17, 2013
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Liquid dreams flow sharp through my veins |
by ThebutterfliesMuse
I love the double point of view poems. Cease fire was great and so is this one. It shows power too both lovers as you give the readers a lot to think about! The imagery is very sad here though. Though vivid I can see everything in my mind. The dress having blood ribbons is great as you go into so much detail about it. No matter what the lover wanted to get to her wedding. That shows how much the girl loved this other person. |