I love the double point of view poems. Cease fire was great and so is this one. It shows power too both lovers as you give the readers a lot to think about! The imagery is very sad here though. Though vivid I can see everything in my mind. The dress having blood ribbons is great as you go into so much detail about it. No matter what the lover wanted to get to her wedding. That shows how much the girl loved this other person.

Its a sad point of view though as she is trying to get to her wedding. Her bride is waiting and not knowing what is about to happen. But I love the vague of the world. Like where did the shot come from. Who shot? Another lover from her past the was jealous. I do love thr details for the people around her and finally the last line she murmurs. No matter what she will always be with her love. The heart is a mighty powerful thing indeed. The last three lines are ghe most powerful. Why couldn't the world just cease fire? Who truly knows. Her brides world torn apart because the world is truly cruel. Beautiful story all together. So sad and powerful. 5/5