I love this poem as it goes from happy to sad. I love all your poems because they have two emotions. The firstline is aamazing because it holds your heart in place. You are falling what seems into nothing at all and I love the jump into the second line here where you are staring into a black hole of depression. But at the end it doesnt matter because your love is there to catch you. I love the ride this poem take you on. Its thrlling and romantic. Love it. 5