I think what should draw people to pems is the title and I am one of those people here. You speak a very powerful message here indeed. The first two lines are great as they say so much. Are we as a society on our way to hell? That is a very good question to ask ourselves. I do love the use of padded cells. I guess it speaks a message of we are all crazy. And its sad that we are because the world is a really beautiful place. You speak the words well this place is not safe anymore.

Reality truly is hard there is no doubt. I love the lying lawyer part. They will do anything to help their clint win no matter what and scoffed is a great word to describe the lawyer. I guess we are all unknown in our own way and its sad how unsafe it is.

The first line of thr third stanza holds so much power. The killer rests as the friend grieves for their loved one.And we never voice our own oopinion anymore we just do what the world wants and does. We ars truly afraid of being judged and not be ourselves. I agree that only God can be our savior. Life is really too short here and thats why we must make it a better place. Your words hold special meaning! 5