Comments : To my darling monsters (babysitting experiences)

  • 11 years ago

    by ThebutterfliesMuse

    This poem I can say is adorable and pretty funny you did great here.

    I love how you describe the kids as monsters because they can be in so many ways. Messy and grumpy and have an attitude lol. Their minds are always on one thing at a time and thats to run around and escape :)). Today we battle the commanding one. That line was so very cute. I love how you describe your self as a leader and you really are as the babysitter! . I love how you put your fears in too that just means we are all human.

    I can see how you can get angry for sure. Three boys are hard to deal with because we were all little once. The imagery is great because I can see the boys running around and pranking and laughing:). Its awesome that they understood because boys dont usually listen haha. Its awesome the you used so much dialogue and then yourself as the narrator. That that really lovely. Overall I think its great... 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by kitten

    I love it sweetie, of course ive already made that clear to everyone in town by now :) its perfect, fun, lively and adorable.

  • 11 years ago

    by Mohan

    I like the description about the kids as monsters.
    wonderful written..