Comments : Mother Dearest

  • 11 years ago

    by ThebutterfliesMuse

    This poem is so very sad because a lot of people go through this or have been through this. I see one flaw on the 6th line buisy should be busy. The poem is good and I loved the rhyming.

    Its sad to think that you went through this. I am so sorry for that. You really did say it all in the poem though. Your mother left you when you were little and you have moved on in life. I guess that is all you can do because although it will always hurt I think you will have good support. You are very brave to share this with the site. You are strong! 5

    • 11 years ago

      by Mainey

      Thanks for the recognition, I guess somethings are easy to share because of the fact that I've gained acceptance on the subject / stay tuned for many more